Action Plan

This is our action plan that we came up with after we were given the feedback. The plan briefly explains what we are going to do in order to improve our video. The feedback that we have was given to us by our teacher and other students that all sat and watched the video. The action plan is something that we as a group have come up with by taking into consideration what people thought and also what we did and din not like when we put the footage on the big screen.

                                                                          The Action Plan Includes:

• Removing the over-cranked sections of the video (it has no effect in the rough cut)
• Get Glenn to actually sing the song so the lip sync is in time
• Glenn 'looks bored' so try and get him to be a bit ore enthusiastic
• Show more life around London e.g. bankers, lower and upper class people
• Clothing was a bit to dark and dull
• Include London as a location more in the video, there is too much singing
• Different locations e.g. markets, banks, outside train stations
• Try and define life

With all of the information that we need to try and improve our video, we now need to consult with Glenn and try and arrange a few dates over the coming weeks where he is available to help us film. I have already messaged Glenn and what with it coming up to half term, Glenn has a lot of work committments that cannot be helped. Over the halfterm, the group will go up to London without Glenn and try and do some filming of different locations were shots do not necessarily involve him.